The Fifty Cent Tour

Sunday, August 17, 2014

10,000 lakes


Yell Sound, Shetland, 2014, R.A.D. Stainforth


time flew
though
just for a few of us

the rest stayed
stuck between rocks
& sand art ultimatums

beautiful sunsets being the reason

oh how we hastened
That Grand Goodbye, but...
oh how we lingered to go

2014-Rene

15 comments:

  1. Ah-I might be among those lingering just to catch a couple of more minutes! Lovely write Rene!

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  2. One never ever truly wants to leave the sea!

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  3. I feel that feet dragging trying to gather the last glimpse in the lens.
    Enjoyable writing

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  4. "stuck between rocks and sand art ultimatums" is gorgeous!

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  5. Takes a lot of imagination to see that sunset-farewell...

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  6. Sand art ultimatums... delicious!

    Love and Light, S

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  7. Beautifully crafted ~ Magpie I am sure is proud of your poem ~ Eddie . . . :)

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  8. That last stanza is glorious Rene!!

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