dark ride February 22, 2015 Image via Magpie Tales your breath bated toothsome a rainbow chorus of seventy six velvet draped anvilsdropped gently swiftly on itsy bitsy toes 2015-Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Brian MillerFebruary 22, 2015 at 3:53 PMyou are making my toes ache rene...boom boom boom...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaryFebruary 22, 2015 at 4:08 PMOuch...the toes will never be the same!!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGabriellaFebruary 22, 2015 at 4:11 PMGreat ending! A dark ride indeed if toes are left squashed.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergFebruary 22, 2015 at 4:32 PMOuch I actually pulled in my toes at the menace of the velvet covered anvil.. great and painful imagery.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRommyFebruary 22, 2015 at 5:22 PMI love the words you've chosen. And of course going with the number 76 made me think of the Music Man, though I think this clown's treachery goes beyond a simple con.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySherry Blue SkyFebruary 22, 2015 at 6:07 PMOuch! My toes shrivel in sympathy!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyZQFebruary 22, 2015 at 7:08 PMI agree with everyones pain :-) Nice write!ZQReplyDeleteRepliesReplySilent Otto February 23, 2015 at 12:07 AMHa ha I'm ve heard of "an ironic fist pump n a velvet glove " before but dont you think this is just taking things a little too far ?? ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJae RoseFebruary 23, 2015 at 8:14 AMI always thought fun fairs had the propensity to be dark..nicely captured!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenFebruary 23, 2015 at 10:18 AMVelvet draped anvils ~ what a visual! I enjoyed this, Rene!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGen Giggles February 23, 2015 at 1:09 PMThis made me cringe, well written. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBrother OllieFebruary 23, 2015 at 4:11 PMfun style! Totally dig the vivid imagery! ReplyDeleteRepliesReply21 WitsFebruary 23, 2015 at 5:14 PMOh no not the toes! ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyWayneFebruary 24, 2015 at 12:41 AMI like this Rene....well doneReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaria MaineroFebruary 24, 2015 at 9:34 AMI like that. . . .sometimes a crowd starts to feel like a violent cartoon.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTess KincaidFebruary 25, 2015 at 12:02 PMQuirky and delightful...as always...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyOptimistic ExistentialistFebruary 25, 2015 at 12:07 PMOUCH - painful but an awesome job :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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you are making my toes ache rene...
ReplyDeleteboom boom boom...
Ouch...the toes will never be the same!!
ReplyDeleteGreat ending! A dark ride indeed if toes are left squashed.
ReplyDeleteOuch I actually pulled in my toes at the menace of the velvet covered anvil.. great and painful imagery.
ReplyDeleteI love the words you've chosen. And of course going with the number 76 made me think of the Music Man, though I think this clown's treachery goes beyond a simple con.
ReplyDeleteOuch! My toes shrivel in sympathy!
ReplyDeleteI agree with everyones pain :-) Nice write!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Ha ha I'm ve heard of "an ironic fist pump n a velvet glove " before but dont you think this is just taking things a little too far ??
ReplyDeleteI always thought fun fairs had the propensity to be dark..nicely captured!
ReplyDeleteVelvet draped anvils ~ what a visual! I enjoyed this, Rene!
ReplyDeleteThis made me cringe, well written.
ReplyDeletefun style! Totally dig the vivid imagery!
ReplyDeleteOh no not the toes!
ReplyDeleteI like this Rene....well done
ReplyDeleteI like that. . . .sometimes a crowd starts to feel like a violent cartoon.
ReplyDeleteQuirky and delightful...as always...
ReplyDeleteOUCH - painful but an awesome job :)
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